Comments on: I Screwed Up–Story 1

By: P.M. Young

P.M. Young — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 21:52:15 +0000

Interesting reading, a bit eccentric but leaves you wanting more. The redhead killing the blond was a Strange occurance and even more strange was the lack of emotion after the killing by all the characters. Great writing, looking for more…really would like to know what story he gives the wife and does the murder lead to an investigation…..

By: LLnL

LLnL — Fri, 02 Oct 2009 14:09:02 +0000

Nice start. I really want to know what happens next.

By: Pyerse

Pyerse — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:57:34 +0000

Thanks you again for such kind words. And more will come!

By: Joan Nyobe

Joan Nyobe — Wed, 30 Sep 2009 04:59:56 +0000

Wow! This one makes me beg for more. What happened when the wife called? The blond is dead right but placed in the backseat? And what was jimmy’s take on this? I guess he slept through the whole thing.