| An online fiction/poetry journal that features emotional poetry, eccentric flash fiction, and an irate, sacrastic employee fiction blog by Pyerse Dandridge
Tuesday February 9th 2010
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  • Careless Whispers

    From Marriagefamilycenter.com

    Gifts, favors, pleaing
    could never undo
    the errors of the tongue.
    Truth only hurts everyone.

    Her eyes said,
    the beautiful ones always smash the picture.”
    I’m just like all the men in her past;
    a waste of time.
    Hate when she feels like this
    that’s why I didn’t want to tell her.

    It was just a phase
    that I had to get out my system.
    Never planned to replace her
    just needed some playtime.

    She collected herself
    and asked,
    “Is it me or her, cause I still
    want you.”
    “You’re not playtime.”

    She walked away,
    as my guts turned and crumbled.
    She was my comforter
    and playtime’s not comforting.
    I ran after her.
    She’s no where in sight
    and her phone was off.

    Damn really?
    We couldn’t work this out?
    All these years together,
    over, done.
    No one more chance?
    Why did I tell her that?

    I’m never going to dance again.

    *Contains samples for Prince’s “Beautiful One” and George Michael’s “Careless Whisper”.

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    3 Responses to “Careless Whispers”

    1. LLnL says:

      I love poems that are obviously from real life experiences. A broken heart writes honest truths that everyone can feel. Thank you for sharing a bit of your heart with your readers.

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    2. Pyerse says:

      Thanks for commenting. Glad you enjoyed the post.

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    3. zo3tic says:

      nice work! what sucks is when u can’t tell if u were #1 or #2, the main chick or the side chick. either one sucks, bc i just wanna be the only chic

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